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 The exact definition of "gene" depends on the context. In the context of 
 genome annotation, a gene has at least a name and is defined by a collection of
 related RNA transcript sequences ("isoforms"). The naming of genes and the
 assignment of the most important transcript sequences is often done manually by
 a group of biological literature curators.  For human, genes names are created
 by the <a target=_blank href="https://www.genenames.org/">Human Gene
 Nomenclature Committee (HGNC, formerly HUGO)</a>.  Non-human species have
 similar annotation groups, e.g. Mouse Genome Informatics, Wormbase, Flybase,
 etc.
 </p>
 
 <a name="genestrans"></a>
 <h6>What is a transcript and how is it related to a gene? </h6>
 <p>
 In the Genome Browser, transcript tracks often end with the word
-&quot;Genes&quot;, e.g. &quot;Ensembl Genes&quot;, &quot;NCBI RefSeq Genes&quot; or &quot;UCSC 
-Genes&quot;, but they really represent transcripts on chromosomes of a genome assembly.</p>
+&quot;Genes&quot;, e.g. &quot;Ensembl Genes&quot;, &quot;NCBI RefSeq Genes&quot;, or &quot;UCSC 
+Genes&quot;. Despite the name, items in these tracks actually represent
+transcripts on chromosomes of a genome assembly</p>
 <p>
 Transcripts are defined as RNA molecules that are made from a DNA template.
 Databases like the ones at the National Library of Medicine's NCBI or the
 European Bioinformatics Institute (EBI) collect these transcript sequences from
 biologists working on a gene. Every transcript has a 
 unique identifier (accession), a gene that it is assigned to, a sequence, and
 a list of exon chrom/start/end coordinates on a chromosome. </p>
 
-<p>A gene usually has multiple transcripts. Some of these differ in only the
-"untranslated region" (UTR), and the coding sequence and protein stay the same.
-Some of the transcripts may stop in the middle of a coding exon, so they
-change the protein.
-Some transcripts of the same gene differ in the way the exons are put together,
-and some exons are skipped entirely, so the transcript contains parts of the
-coding sequence of other transcripts, as a new combination in the same order.
-</p>
+<p>Most genes have multiple transcripts associated with them. Some of these transcripts
+differ only in the "untranslated regions" (UTRs), while the coding sequence and resulting
+protein stay the same. Some transcripts may instead stop in the middle of a coding exon,
+which changes the protein. Some transcripts may even put the exons together in a different
+way or skip some exons entirely.</p>
 
 <p>
-So almost every human gene has multiple transcripts, but, at least in
-databases, every transcript is assigned to only a single gene.  For example,
+While most genes are associated with multiple transcripts, however, each transcript is
+only assigned to a single gene (at least in databases). In other words, different genes
+never share the same transcript. For example,
 using the databases
 by NCBI, the gene
 with the gene symbol <a target=_blank
 href="https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/gene/672#">BRCA1</a> has 5 protein-coding
 transcripts or isoforms. The first transcript has the NCBI accession number <a
 target=_blank
 href="https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/nuccore/NM_007294.3">NM_007294.3</a> which
 produces the protein with the accession<a target=_blank
 href="https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/protein/NP_009225.1"> NP_009225.1</a>. In
 the human genome, it is located on chromosome 17, where it is comprised of <a
 target=_blank href="https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/nuccore/U14680">23 exons</a>.
 On the version hg38/GRCh38 of the human genome, these exons cover the DNA
 nucleotides 43044295 to 43125483.</p>
 
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