3abfa2a7125a73d5acd489f728e6328bddbe8e2c
kuhn
  Tue Aug 17 14:37:25 2021 -0700
a few rewordings and punc tweaks I noticed

diff --git src/hg/makeDb/trackDb/human/exomeProbesets.html src/hg/makeDb/trackDb/human/exomeProbesets.html
index 41a822b..3673001 100755
--- src/hg/makeDb/trackDb/human/exomeProbesets.html
+++ src/hg/makeDb/trackDb/human/exomeProbesets.html
@@ -25,43 +25,44 @@
 <ul>
 <li><b><font color="#FFB000">IDT (Integrated DNA Technologies)</font></b></li>
 <li><b><font color="#FE6100">Twist Biosciences</font></b></li>
 <li><b><font color="#DC267F">MGI Tech (Beijing Genomics Institute)</font></b></li>
 <li><b><font color="#648FFF">Roche NimbleGen</font></b></li>
 <li><b><font color="#785EF0">Agilent Technologies</font></b></li>
 <li><b><font color="#163EA4">Illumina</font></b></li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
 <p>
 Tracks labeled as <em><b>Probes (P)</em></b> indicate the footprint of the oligonucleotide probes
 mapped to the human genome. This is the technically relevant targeted region by the assay. However, 
 the sequenced region will be bigger than this since flanking sequences are sequenced as well.  
 Tracks labeled as <em><b>Target Regions (T)</em></b> indicate the genomic regions targeted by the
-assay. This is the biologically relevant target region. It's not granted that all targeted regions
-will be sequenced perfectly, it might be some capture bias on certain locations. The Target
+assay. This is the biologically relevant target region. Not all targeted regions
+will necessarily be sequenced perfectly; there might be some capture bias at certain locations.
+The Target
 Regions are those normally used for coverage analysis. 
 </p>
 
 <h1>Methods</h1>
 
 <p>
 The capture of the genomic regions of interest using <b>in-solution capture</b>, is achieved 
 through the hybridization of a set of probes (oligonucleotides) with a sample of fragmented genomic 
 DNA in a solution environment. The probes hybridize selectively to the genomic regions of interest 
 which, after a process of exclusion of the non-selective DNA material, can be pulled down and 
-sequenced enabling selective DNA sequencing of the genomic regions (e.g. exons) of interest. 
+sequenced, enabling selective DNA sequencing of the genomic regions of interest (e.g., exons).
 In-solution capture sequencing is a sensitive method to detect single nucleotide variants, 
 insertions and deletions, and copy number variations.
 <p>
 
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    <tr>
       <th>Kit</th>
@@ -271,22 +272,23 @@
 found in the Table Schema page for each subtrack after "Primary Table:".
 
 <p>
 For downloading the data, the annotations are stored in bigBed files that
 can be accessed at
 <a href="http://hgdownload.soe.ucsc.edu/gbdb/$db/exomeProbesets/" target="_blank">
 our download directory</a>. 
 Regional or the whole genome text annotations can be obtained using our utility 
 <tt>bigBedToBed</tt>. Instructions for downloading utilities can be found
 <a href="http://hgdownload.soe.ucsc.edu/downloads.html#utilities_downloads">here</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h1>Credits</h1>
 
 <p> 
-Thanks to Illumina (U.S), Roche NimbleGen, Inc. (U.S.), Agilent Technologies (U.S.), MGI Tech 
+Thanks to Illumina (U.S.), Roche NimbleGen, Inc. (U.S.), Agilent Technologies (U.S.), MGI Tech
 (Beijing Genomics Institute, China), Twist Bioscience (U.S.), and Integrated DNA Technologies (IDT),
-Inc. (U.S.). for making this data available and to Tiana Pereira, Pranav Muthuraman, Began Nguy and Anna Benet-Pages for enginering this tracks.
+Inc. (U.S.) for making these data available and to Tiana Pereira, Pranav Muthuraman, Began Nguy
+and Anna Benet-Pages for enginering these tracks.
 </p>